Showing posts with label second draft. Show all posts
Showing posts with label second draft. Show all posts

Writing short stories (2) - Does your short story have a beginning and an end?

So you want to write a short story? Does your short story have a beginning and an end? You do realize that the concept of a short story requires it to dispense with a gradual build up to introduce the location, place-in-time and the characters and their many relationships. Thus, the successful short story usually depends on known and familiar places to the reader. 

If you are writing for the people of your town or your part of the world, you would know that they are familiar with the locations. But if you are writing a short story located in remote Siberia and the story is meant for a global audience, you want to limit yourself only to the very obvious aspects of Siberia. 

The story needs to begin rather immediately with a situation that every reader would be familiar with. The protagonist and the antagonist need to be identified rather at the very beginning and their conflict must be written about with good clarity. The antagonist may actually be carrying the entire story and it should be made clear very early. 

The advantage of a short story is that it has to certainly have a beginning and an end. It helps you confine the story to a certain number of words and pages. The disadvantage is that as an author you begin to fall in love with the characters and you may not want either of them to lose so abruptly. You may thus want to keep on writing. 

That is the reason why one needs to impose a maximum number of words for the first draft. Stop your writing at that limit. One can expand on the story or the conflict when one goes from the first to the second draft. The story will definitely grow but it will not gain strength to become a novel. 



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Bharat Bhushan, 11 July 2021

Writing short stories (1) - How short is a short story?

How short is a short story? It can be measured in good terms if you are typing it in and using a computer. I generally have a benchmark of 4 A4 pages for a short story but it has to be a very tight four pages. I use the default page setting in Ms Word and do not change the margins except to add a single line header for the title and a single line footer for the page number. I choose to work in Times New Roman font at Size 11 Normal font. 

I do not bring in sub-titles in the first draft in order to allow for a complete non-formatted short story to be completed. I give a 5-space indent to the first word of every para but do not provide any space to para breaks. This helps me use the entire writing space of the four A4 pages. 

It is difficult to write up to four pages if one is a new writer and if one does not have the practice. You can improve as you go forward and it becomes somewhat easier in future attempts. The other problem is when the story does not want to end with the last paragraph of the 4th page. That's ok. If you typed in four pages, you have done a good starter's job. The story is out there and now you can work with it. 

The tougher task begins in editing the text from the first to the second draft. You need to be careful here. Do not shorten the story in the second draft. Allow it to grow from the four A4 pages to five pages. This helps you to develop the characters and allows your principal character in the short story to appear real, plausible and believable and larger than the scope of the first draft. 



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(2) Does your short story have a beginning and an end?


Bharat Bhushan, 10 July 2021